This picture was taken at my home with a low shutter speed due to the flash used. I has good aspects such as the unpredictable patterns. However it could be improved by removing the flash setting and taking it with a higher shutter speed instead.This picture was taken on southend-on-sea on a cold day, thus affecting the cold look of the pattern. The was a short shutter speed with a low ISO sensitivity giving it a clear look of a photo. The good aspect of this photo is that is it obvious to see the pattern. However this could be improved by framing the image so that the yellow on the left and right side is removed.
This final photo was also taken at southend-on-sea. The camera settings used was an ISO sensitivity of 100 and a short shutter speed since the lighting was generally bright. I believe that this photo could not be edited to improve it since it already shows the clear patterns of the bricklaying.
Editing:
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This photo has been edited so that the yellow layers of pattern are removed from the original piece. This makes the photo more visually pleasing in comparison to the original.
Ok you again need to revisit the checklist for component 1.. you need to include a Progression stage. You are making good progression but need to link the theory that you have already learnt to your analysis of what you have done.. as per the previous posts I think you need a wider repertoire of images to draw from and you will need to think of visual examples which are visually engaging.... much of your photographs tend tot be taken indoors on texture and pattern, I find that surprising as the visual world has several examples of texture and pattern in nature and outside geometric shapes for examples windows and doors conform to pattern as well.. In short you must look at taking a wider range of photographs and develop your photographic eye (aesthetics)....
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